I need somebody to proofread my essay pleaseee?

"Persecution it is a sad reality in every corner of the world." should be changed to "Persecution is a sad reality in every corner of the world." The first one is a sentence fragment. You also need to indent your paragraphs. At the end of the first paragraph you an apostrophe at the end Trail of Tears. You put: Trail of Tears' It should be Trail of Tears with no apostrophe. Also, I'm not sure what Diff? ^^^ is and your teacher might not either. "Jews inferior, Hitler didn’t like them, and wanted to kill them." doesn't need a comma before and. I also don't think you can start a sentence like that. Do you mean "The Jews were inferior? In the sentence "The thing that made each group similar and different was of the leader they had." You should change this sentence to "The thing that made each group similar and different was the leader they had." In paragraph 4 I think you have a typo in the sentence "The Nazi’s used a phrase called “The Final Solution,” which meant for the Nazi regime to find and easier way" You put and easier way. I think you meant to put "an easier way" At the end of paragraph 4, in the sentence " Others would be burned to ashes in ovens, designed to burn humans." There is no need for a comma. The sentence "Hate and hate crimes will always exist within our world, we cannot escape it, but we can fight against it." is a run-on sentence and should be changed to "Hate and hate crimes will always exist within our world. We cannot escape it, but we can fight against it." In the last paragraph you're talking in the present except for in one sentence. The sentence "Many people found it hard to believe the Jews because the events were too horrible for men and women to believe." does not belong in that paragraph. You should probably place it somewhere else in the essay since you are talking about the past in the other paragraphs. You can't be talking about the present in a paragraph and then out of nowhere have a sentence talking about something that occured in the past. It is irrelevant. You also need a period on the last sentence of the paragraph. Hope this helps. If you have any questions you can email me on here. Good luck with your essay! It is a good essay, very interesting.